The re-filmed shots looks a lot better and more proffesional than last time. I like how you have used voice overs over other actors. The music works really well but maybe if you could use all of the instrumental part so there is no singing whilst the actors are speaking.
Very nice third draft, shot selection varies nicely and all shots are steady when necessary. The soundtrack suits the trailer very well and does not disrupt the dialogue.
The music goes really well with the trailer and helps to emphasize the emotions through the storylines. The editing and title cards used make this trailer look very professional and draw the audeince in making them want to watch more
this looks really professional, just have a mess around with your sound abit though because the openening lyric to the song drowns out a little bit of diolouge. but you have managed to leave the audience wanting more :)
The re-filmed shots looks a lot better and more proffesional than last time. I like how you have used voice overs over other actors. The music works really well but maybe if you could use all of the instrumental part so there is no singing whilst the actors are speaking.
ReplyDeleteVery nice third draft, shot selection varies nicely and all shots are steady when necessary. The soundtrack suits the trailer very well and does not disrupt the dialogue.
ReplyDeleteThe soundtrack works really well, good replaced shots. Enticing storyline! Maybe turn the music down a tiny bit whilst actors are talking x
ReplyDeleteThe music goes really well with the trailer and helps to emphasize the emotions through the storylines. The editing and title cards used make this trailer look very professional and draw the audeince in making them want to watch more
ReplyDeletethis looks really professional, just have a mess around with your sound abit though because the openening lyric to the song drowns out a little bit of diolouge. but you have managed to leave the audience wanting more :)
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